Thesis statement: Online games appeal people with their charming background stories, good way of communication and the need for teamwork.
Topic sentences: 1. every online game possesses its own appealing background story.
Supporting detail: In the story of World of the Warcraft, the writer tells us the history of the “world” , how races in the “world” fights against the demons from another “world” and conflicts among these races since life appeared. Moreover, there are a number of heroes in different eras in this epical story. Young people love this kind of story related to heroes.
2. As people depend more on the Internet, online games become one of the best ways to communicate with friends while killing time with fun.
Supporting detail: I play online games with my good friends. In the games, we talk, have match, help each other out and face difficulties together. We are connected even if it is raining heavily outside.
3. Nowadays, players who love teamwork tend to choose games that need teamwork, which is the very characteristic of online games.
Supporting detail: In World of Warcraft, if we want a successful raid, everybody in the team should take their responsibilities. Some players have to protect the team from the monsters, while others attack the enemies or heal their teammates. Works can’t be done individually.
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